EXAMPLE

September 2001: Speaking and Selling in Standard English

 The client is a Japanese businessman

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In Japan there has been attempt to implement biomass energy.  But because food self-sufficiency rate is so low most attention is paid on wastes and by-products, and there has not been much attention on energy crop even though energy crop is becoming more common in the US and Europe.

An attempt has been made to implement biomass energy in Japan. But because the food self-sufficiency rate is so low, most attention is focused on wastes and by-products. Little attention has been directed toward energy crops, even though they are becoming more common in the U.S. and Europe.

A would like to indicate B to order an advertisement at following conditions.

A would provide necessary information for advertisement immediately when there is a request from B.  B would be provided with necessary reporting from A, and B would be totally responsible for the contents of advertisement. As A receive the indicated amount B, it should make immediate payment to the contracting advertisement agency

For purposes of these instructions, the client is known as “A” and the contracting advertisement agency is known as “B.” When A wants to order an advertisement, it provides B the necessary information authorizing scope and size. B is totally responsible for creating the content of the advertisement. When B has returned to A the agreed upon amount of advertisement content, A is expected to make immediate payment to B.

Because there are variety in this collection, you can enjoy the color coordination of kimono and bags.

Variety in this collection coordinates colors with both formal and casual wear.

Handbags coordinated with kimonoe.  This is the new joy of kimono.  Bag

Handbags coordinated with kimonos subtly set off the understated elegance of this traditional wear.

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