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February 2002:  Basic Proofing and Polishing

 

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This year we are doing it all over again and we’ll also be featuring Hearts On Fire’s Sabrina jewlery collcection. This will be an event you do not want to miss!!!

This year we are doing it all over again. We’ll also be featuring Hearts On Fire’s Sabrina jewelry collection, an event you do not want to miss!!!

Upon closer inspection there are huge differences.

Closer inspection reveals huge differences.

When you work with it on a daily basis, just picking it up you can feel the difference in weight.

When you work with it on a daily basis, you can feel the difference in weight just by lifting it.

These are often the hardest and most time consuming parts to polish, and is a good indication of the care put into the overall piece.

As often the hardest and most time-consuming parts to polish, attention to them is a good indication of the care put into the overall piece.

The Sabrina line has several types of jewelry from pendants to bangles, and rings, to earrings. (See pages 4-5) they have also created and extraordinary elegant diamond Decadence Necklace which is set with over 13 cts. of the most brilliant diamonds that dance with light and catches the eyes attention immediately, and fills you with a sensation of AW!!!

The Sabrina line has several types of jewelry from pendants to bangles, rings, and earrings (see pages 4–5). They have also created an extraordinary and elegant diamond Decadence Necklace set with over 13 cts. of the most brilliant diamonds that dance with light, catch the eye immediately, and fill you with a sensation of AWE!!!

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