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March 2002:  Fine-tuning a letter

 

for Hugo W. Merida, principal director of the
International Trade Committee California Hispanic Chambers of Commerce,
Los Angeles, California. www.caitc.org
   www.cahcc.com

 

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It was an enlightening meeting this afternoon at CMTAC office in Los Angeles.  We at the International Trade committee of the California Hispanic Chambers of Commerce appreciate your information and efforts in reaching our chambers members and its individual members.

 

We are in the process of organizing our newly created National Trade Commission who is composed of national organisms and agencies in international trade and commerce.  This commission constitute genuine lobby and collaborative effort whose intermediation mutually will seek funding and create regionally favorable climate for the activities of the participants trade and commerce programs and the concepts that are associated with it like integration, innovation, competitiveness, articulation, cooperation, etc. 

 

We are enclosing a copy of our agenda of activities for 2002 with a potential addition of an Agricultural Mission to Mexico during the month of November 2002.

We at the International Trade committee of the California Hispanic Chambers of Commerce enjoyed this afternoon's enlightening and informative meeting at the CMTAC office in Los Angeles. Thank you for your information as well as your efforts in reaching chamber and individual members alike.

 

What you presented is most helpful to us as we organize our newly created National Trade Commission, which is composed of national organizations and agencies active in international trade and commerce. The groups that comprise this commission will work collaboratively to lobby and intermediate in efforts to seek funding and create a regionally favorable climate for participants' trade and commerce programs and associated concepts such as integration, innovation, competitiveness, articulation, and cooperation. 

 

We are enclosing a copy of our agenda of activities for 2002 with the potential addition of an Agricultural Mission to Mexico during the month of November 2002.

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