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In a radio interview, Jane Fonda explained why she separated from her husband, Ted Turner, whom she described as very needy; She characterized herself as habitually very pliable (National Public Radio 2001).

In a National Public Radio interview with XYZ on Day Month Year, Jane Fonda explained why she separated from her husband, Ted Turner, describing him as very needy and herself as habitually very pliable. 

Finally, there is an autobiographical piece, “Albums and Legends” by Cixous, herself, which positions the reader at that most essential point of departure, her “origin” or roots.

Finally, Cixous’s autobiographical piece, “Albums and Legends,” positions the reader at that most essential point of departure, her “origin” or roots.

This paper is a revision of my keynote address to the conference of the International Association of Women Philosophers on the theme of “Knowledge/Power/Gender.” The conference was held in Zuerich, Switzerland, October 2000. 

This paper is a revision of my keynote address to the October 2000 conference of the International Association of Women Philosophers held in Zurich, Switzerland, on the theme of “Knowledge/Power/Gender.”

In late March 1999, National Public Radio stated that $25 billion of capital was currently leaving Russia annually. 

In late March 1999, National Public Radio stated that every year Russia was losing capital worth $25 billion.

This would be an unacceptable disturbance to America’s most hallowed war grave, especially among the 289 sailors who miraculously survived the inferno and their descendents. 

This would be an unacceptable disturbance to America’s most hallowed war grave, especially among the 289 sailors who miraculously survived the inferno, and also for their descendents. 

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