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Nov. 1999: Let’s Assay That Essay*

The question: Your group is due to present its project in just one week. You’re leading the last meeting before the due date, tension is building and your team has reached an impasse. What role would you take in such a situation? How would you enable the team to meet its deadline?

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We were in the final stage of the project and we only had about a week but each of the person had different interest and interest. My role in this stage was to faciliate discussiion while not to facilitate too much discussion since we were already behind and deadline was getting close.Another ne problem was the conflict withing the group dealing with how the presentation should be held. We already had so many notes and materials including recorded video tapes. On a limited available time we have to cutdown to amount that is possible. What I had done as a leader was to try to create a consensus based on my idea in which preferrs more of field research and tried to direct the group to that side while not ignoring the preference over more theroriethical approace, and tried to create a good harmony. My role at this late stage was to move the team towards decision and consensus about their different interests and preferences for presenting information. This I did by facilitating discussion but not too much since we were already behind and the deadline was close. I dealt with the conflict within the group about whether to focus on field research or theory by encouraging and listening to each preference, while creating harmony around my preference of field research. I believe that a good leader respects his own ideas as much as he does those of the group, and uses his position responsibly to take the initiative to make things better.

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