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How many percentage does the customer generate revenue to your company?

What is the percentage of revenue generated by XYZ customers to your company?

What approximately percentage of business provider is the resident of XYZ?   

Approximately what percentage of business associates are residents of XYZ?

How many square foot is your operating space?

Our hypothesis is that country of origin plays an important role on the particular immigrant group’s earnings, and we like use the survey data we collect from the XYZ Neighborhood to prove that hypothesis.

Our hypothesis is that country of origin plays an important role in the earnings of particular immigrant groups; and we use the survey data we collected from the XYZ neighborhood to prove that hypothesis.

We view services that company provide to customer who are from XYZ is another return to the city of XYZ. Therefore, the questions in this section are asking about how big is the customer based each company has.