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PITH

August 2000: Brevity and Clarity

Usually, fewer words convey a point briefly and directly, but sometimes more words make the point clearly. Both examples are from work for http://www.techlinks.net.

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When posting your meeting remember that people are very busy and they often have to select between options for what they want to attend. Borrowing from Tom Peter's, place some comments here that will explain the WOW! factor. A real benefit or positive point which favors attendance. This can help your attendance factor. 53 words

Your meeting is one among many attractive options for busy people. Take a page from Tom Peter's book by placing here a real benefit or positive point that will encourage attendance. 31 words

To search our directory of information technology companies click the appropriate category below. To search our directory of non-tech companies, select a category in the box further below then click "Search." 31 words

To search our directory of information technology companies, click the appropriate category below. To search our directory of non-tech companies, scroll down to the "Find Other Georgia Websites" box, select a category and then click "Search." 36 words