This would be an unacceptable disturbance to America’s most hallowed war grave, especially among the 289 sailors who miraculously survived the inferno and their descendents. 

This would be an unacceptable disturbance to America’s most hallowed war grave, especially among the 289 sailors who miraculously survived the inferno, and also for their descendents. 

The best way to describe the scene is similar to heat waves that rise off of hot pavement as divers pass through the boundary into a warmer layer of saltwater.

The best way to describe the scene when divers pass through the boundary into a warmer layer of saltwater is to think of the heat waves that arise from hot pavement.

Gm trailed Nissan by 1 point, statistically insignificant, last May.

GM trailed Nissan by a statistically insignificant one point last May.